There is a article named Letter from Los Angeles by Joan Didion. This article is basically very cold. The author shows and describes this article very carless. I believe the author should at least pretend to care because to few viewers it might show she does not care about what is happening. She may be a carless author but showing a little emotional does not hurt. When she describes the scene where there is a car accident, she does not show everything detail by detail. Instead she just tells the scene by telling viewers how ever she feels like it. She needs to put a little emotion to it. The story is boring because its like she's just telling the story just to say it. She needs more details and emotion to her stories. I thought to myself maybe since a scene is coming up, she may describe it and put a little emotion to it. Well she didn't do it. I believe her writing has a little bit of simile and also metaphor but at the same time, I don't believe so. Her piece is a little confusing.
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